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Her and Me

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I looked at her.
Skirt swirling around her ankles,
Glossy hair curling its way
To her slender waist.
Huge, blue eyes.

I looked at myself.
Short cropped hair,
Orange tunic, and trousers,
Hanging off my now skeletal form.
Disguised as a man.

He looked at her too.
Thinking his thoughts.
Now I'd lost him.
This wasn't originally I poem. I don't write poetry. But when I wrote it, it kinda sounded like one. So maybe Laela likes writing poetry.

PS "Me" is Laela, "Him" is Tor, and you'll just have to wait to find out who "Her" is :P
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Owyr's avatar
I like how this piece gives me more questions than it does answers, reminds me of hint fiction.